Peer Review #2

CAMERON COLE

Cameron’s blog is available at: https://cameroncole.home.blog/2019/08/28/creative-take-any-single-australian-painting-that-you-saw-at-the-gallery-yesterday-and-write-a-description-either-in-poetry-or-prose/

This blog is written very well, with vibrant language that describes a person experience. The creative language and the pairing of particular words has been successful in portraying a personal connection to the landscape, as well as breathes life into the landscape itself e.g. ‘…one could see errant wisps of fog, forgotten by the mass that floated above…’ Ultimately, it is very well composed and is impressive to read. The choice of words is not over-complicated but still manages to provide the reader with a magical, somewhat poetic depiction of the landscape.